Wednesday, September 7, 2011

there are 18 mistakes in this paragraph!! who can find them first ;)

there are 18 mistakes in this paragraph!! who can find them first ;)?
Elizbeth Blackwell who was born in 1821 in England became the first woman in the United States to recieve a medical degree. Rejected at 29 medical schools Blackwell was accepted in 1847 at Geneva College in western New Yourk, and graduated with highest honors. Even so she was unable to find a hospitol that would except her credentials. To continue her studies she was treating in a clinic for the poor. Eventualy, she lost the sight in her left eye and it had to be removed. Returning to New York shd and her sister who also became a doctor, opened a hospital for women and children. During the Civil War which was the bloodiest deadliest war in America's histry they trained nurses for the Union Army.
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xD nice try getting people to do your homework for you i wanna see who the first idiot to do it is
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Elizabeth Blackwell, who was born in 1821 in England, became the first woman in the United States to receive a medical degree. Rejected at 29 medical schools, Blackwell was accepted in 1847 at Geneva College in western New York, and graduated with highest honors even though she was unable to find a hospital that would except her credentials. To continue her studies she helped treat in a clinic for the poor. Eventually, she lost the sight in her left eye and it had to be removed. Returning to New York, she and her sister who also became a doctor, opened a hospital for women and children. During the Civil War, which was the bloodiest and deadliest war in America's history, they trained nurses for the Union Army between bloodiest and deadliest, they can be separated by either and or commas
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1. Elizabeth (sp) 2. comma after Blackwell 3. comma after England 4. receive (sp) 5. comma after schools 6. York (sp) 7. comma after so 8. hospital (sp) 9. accept , instead of except 10. comma after studies 11.Eventually (sp) 12.comma after York 13.she instead of shd 14.comma after sister 15.comma after War 16. "and" after bloodiest 17. history (sp) 18. comma after history I think I did it!



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